Caldecott Critique: GOLDFINCHES by Mary Oliver, illustrated by Melissa Sweet (+ Giveaway)
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I will now present this book as if I was a member of the 2027 Caldecott committee . . .
Click here for the official Caldecott Medal Terms and Criteria
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Click here for a great interview with Melissa Sweet about this book by Betsy Bird
My fellow committee members (or MFCMs), lend me your ear. Both ears, actually. Eyes too. Definitely eyes.
We’re off to a bad start. Let’s try that again.
Fellow committee members, I’m thrilled to present to you one of the most distinguished picture books of the year: GOLDFINCHES - a poem written by Mary Oliver and illustrated by Melissa Sweet.
Let’s begin . . .
. . . with the case! Both front and back case images are taken from later in the book. I want to start here because the way GOLDFINCHES is illustrated mirrors how a devoted birder goes about their passion: by collecting, noting, and assembling meaning from the natural world. Here it is instantly evident that the art has this same feel - full of color swatches, clippings, diagrams, notations, and drawings that act as snapshots of the titular bird and its habitat. In this way, Sweet’s mixed media collage artwork is perfectly suited for the topic and theme of Mary Oliver’s naturalist poem (from the criteria - “Appropriateness of style of illustration to the story, theme or concept”).
This journal feel continues on the endpapers above (which feature a table-setting quote from Oliver, pulled from the foreword to her book LONG LIFE: ESSAYS AND OTHER WRITINGS). The left side gives the feel of the artist assembling her thoughts before beginning in full, with glimpses of things to come.
I want to linger on the right side a second because there’s a small detail you might miss if you’re not looking for it: the color palette under the Oliver quote.
The colors are named in the way they will be described later in the book: “Coin of reddish fire” for the magenta of the thistle, “Buttery gold” for the yellow of the goldfinch, and so on. This is the sort of subtle foreshadowing that makes this book feel more well-considered that most.
On to the title page . . .
Again, Sweet has filled the spread with details that reward repeat readings (even the type under the Viking logo on the right side appears to be hand-made). The map and key on the left side are a perfect delineation of setting. We now know the story takes place in North America, and specifically Cape Cod Bay near Long Point. The image of the journal on the right is just as important, as it sets the stage for the main artistic conceit of the book.
More about that on the next spread . . .
I mean, it’s only the first official spread and it’s pretty clear already that we’re dealing with a master here. The Caldecott criteria calls this “Excellence of execution in the artistic technique employed”, and Sweet’s rich, layered art throughout this book exemplifies that again and again.
On the left side bottom, a desk indoors. What is that sitting on the desk? Yep, the thistle-colored journal that was open on the title page. Sweet is already establishing a visual narrative (one of many in this book) that carries the reader from page to page. You can imagine all the art for this book being made in that journal. The protagonist of this story is the illustrator of this story. It’s a clever metafictional conceit that creates a character the reader can follow (and, BTDubs, is not mentioned in the text).
Above the desk, what appears to be a birch forest. From that desk, the protagonist imagines the world outside. On the right side we see a tangle of branches at the bottom of the page - the nature that was imagined on the left side is now firmly underfoot on the right. The protagonist moves right, lending momentum to the page turn.
And what’s that protagonist carrying? That same hot pink journal.
After the page turn, the thistles mentioned in the poem get a full spread. There’s a zoom-in image and a diagram on the left, and a zoom-out on the right. These three elements could be jarringly disparate, but if you look closely, a vertically lined paper sits at the bottom of the entire spread, unifying the left and right side.
After “coins of reddish fire”, the next spread switches things up.
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Just when we might be noticing the color palette repeating, this spread wisely mixes it up, bringing in the golden “Brass heat” mentioned on the endpapers. The overarching colors of this book are determined by the main elements of the poem: thistle pink, goldfinch yellow, and here, sun golden. Everything is cohesive.
Oliver’s simple, evocative words give clues that Sweet runs with and expands. Since the text is a poem, Sweet is interpreting more than your average illustrator here (definite points in the “Pictorial interpretation of story” category of the criteria).
Goldfinches fill the trees, bringing in some potential energy that will become kinetic on the next spread. Then the birds take flight.
This is the first time the protagonist has appeared on the left side so far. That’s important, because it stops the forward momentum for a minute. This is the moment the young ornithologist has waited for - so now is not the time to rush past. We are all observers on this spread.
The protagonist writes in her journal, looking to the right side of the spread, where we see the largest display of goldfinches yet. Interestingly, the protagonist is placed inside a sort of rectangle that stands out on the spread, emphasizing that she’s quietly watching, a part of, but also apart from the scene around her.
What are the goldfinches up to?
Over the next three spreads above, we see:
In the first spread (left), and full introduction to the birds and their task: pulling thistle down (which we learn is called pappus from the diagram on the right side) to be used soon. The triangle pattern on the right echoing the “finchy beaks” mentioned in the poem, and the forest at the “edges of the fields”, providing more delineation of setting and excellence of pictorial interpretation.
In the second spread (center), a burst of energy. After a few spreads of observation, Sweet smartly takes us back on the move. The goldfinch is flying into the spread from the left side, restarting that momentum. On the right side, a bit more delineation of character, as we see our protagonist isn’t alone - a small group also watches the activity.
In the third spread (right), one of the best images of the book (no wonder they put it on the case). We see the reason for the pappus: nest-building material. It’s a specific show of nonfiction visual storytelling that makes the next spread even more impactful.
Here the color palette shifts to sky blue, and the cut paper collage comes back, matched with . . . photography? I did not have “real bird nest” on my GOLDFINCHES bingo card. Where the last spread was more Audubon, this spread leans Paul Klee, using abstraction to depict the passage of time and goldfinch migration patterns. Wow.
It’s the perfect time to bring back the whole “Excellence of execution in the artistic technique employed” bit from the criteria. In this book, Sweet shows her incredible range: from realistic to abstract, created with an astonishing array of tools and mediums. She’s executing multiple techniques in GOLDFINCHES, at a distinguished level, often within the same spreads. I ask you, MFCMs, How many other books this year are doing that?
I’m going to jump ahead a few spreads to talk about two more important moments before we go on break.
Even as we come to the close of the book, the illustrations are still trying stuff, illuminating the setting while playing with unique compositions. The left shows goldfinches painted in detail and the right switches to abstract cut paper. It makes me ask, Why does the left and right side of the spread work so well together? I think it’s the the negative space flipflop. You can almost draw a sinewave beginning on the left side moving across the spread, with the negative space smoothly moving from the bottom to the top (don’t worry, I’ll save all Golden Ratio talk for another time). Another subtly brilliant way to make two different images feel of a piece.
Jumping one more spread to take us to closing image:
It’s nighttime. Our protagonist is back home (safe and sound in another little rectangle at the bottom of the left side). Above - the thistle-colored journal is back, containing the final line of the poem, putting a button on that motif. A horizon extends across both pages, as a goldfinch looks right - toward the golden dawn to come.
GOLDFINCHES proves on every page that it is one of the most distinguished picture books of the year.
Okay, break time! Where’s the restroom again? This place is a maze.
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(Images courtesy of Penguin Young Readers)
This is beautiful! The book and your study of it.
Would love a deep dive on Story Rug.